2009年6月2日 星期二

Take a One-day MRT's Trip in Taipei

Today is sunday,my father and monther took me to Taipei by MRT.
First,we arrived at the Taipei Zoo.Wow!there were so many animals that I have ever seem.
For example,penguins and koala,and we also saw monkeys and lions.
In the eveing,we were hungry,we ate so much delicious food.We ate so much food that I feel full.
Today was a happy day,I hope next time we can visit Taipei again.

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  1. Nice to meet u again!
    1.Today is sunday,my father and monther took me to Taipei by MRT.
    → Today was Sunday, and my parents took me to Taipei by MRT.
    2. there were so many animals that I have ever seem.For example,penguins and koala,and we also saw monkeys and lions.

    → There were so many rare animals, such as penguins, koalas, monkeys, and lions.
    3. In the eveing,we were hungry,we ate so much delicious food.
    → In the evening, we were hungry so we ate a lot of delicious food.
    4. We ate so much food that I feel full.
    → We ate so much food that I felt so full.

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